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LSW 7: Analysis of a prominent organization like my client #2

My authentic client is my lovely sorority Alpha Omega Christian Sorority Incorporated. Thus for this second analysis, I looked at the first 20 post of another sorority known as Sigma Gamma Rho.

In regards to the Standard Edited English or Academic English, I found that SGRho’s first 20 post catered mostly to the Standard Edited English format of writing. That particular form of writing was heavily seen whenever they gave honor and recognition to their famous sorors from the past or sorors from the present who were accomplishing great feats in the entertainment realm such as Kelly Price (the Gospel Singer who recently won a Grammy for Best Songwriter) or the political realm such as Robin Kelly (candidate for former Democrat Jesse Jackson Jr.’s seat in Illinois).  Below is an example of the sorority using Standard Edited English to highlight Robin Kelly’s race for office:

“UPDATE: Soror Robin Kelly has taken the lead in the race for Congress. Soror Kelly is running for former Rep. Jesse Jackson Jr.’s seat in Illinois.”

Their post is short, precise and to the point, and also does an excellent job of advertising their sorority to potential and current sorors!

Word count: 196

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  1. March 4, 2013 at 3:30 pm

    I’m learning a lot from your posts. Thank you for remembering to label it with “LSW” and the appropriate number. Please link to your sources in an appropriate manner.

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